Jules the jester

(hiro. I am sorry to say that having your stomahc sliced open and your guts spilling to teh ground is NOT cureable. even if all the entrails had been forced ...

Thank god i saw that. had such a bad day but that has cheered me up. PAT BUCHANAN

Culas laughed harshly and with another snaping of the fingers sent teh man hurling back against the wall where he was pinned, UNABLE to move. 'your name means nothing to ...

'your not going anywhere boyo' Culas walked from the bar a pint still in his hands. He clicked his fingers and the woman fell to the ground. the dry arrivee ...

The door to the tavern once again banged open and four tal broad shouldered men entered. all wore expensive oiled leather cloaks that protected them from the elements. The leading ...

The short man leans over closer to the bar maid. 'I say we get the boys out here' The bar maid nodded. The short man sipped his ale. 'let him ...

A few minutes later a short man with a slight limp walked into the tavern. He wore no cloak or coat and his meagre cheap clothing was soaked through. The ...

I enjoyed it. My type of reading. But i did think it was a bit boring in some places. he did this, then he did that, then this Spice it ...

Dragon background rules. Bliming brilliant if i may say so. definately prefer this to the others.

I loved it. Brilliant. I cant find any faults in it either. Really good. I just finished studying poetry in school and have started to read it alot more.

tell the truth. i enjoyed the first chapter by far. i just found this one a little bit of a chore to read rather than an enjoyable thing. But then ...

Hello. it is indeed weird being the new one. took me a few weeks to meet new people on here. Anyway dont worry. you will get to know alot of ...

I enjoyed it greatly. looking forward to more of the same quality.

I am slightly hooked to the story. But you need to spice up the sentances. It is like He did this. he did that. i used to write like that ...

I have taken into account all of your suggestions and advice and have decided to keep the history bit untill later in the book where maybe the story is told ...